Reading, check
1. pace 2. fluency 3. expression . NEW ACE in mind.
Appropriate pauses, clear pronunciation, Expression
Picture, PRESENT TENSE check
1. Introduction general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
On talking points: For each talking point, think of the VOCAB words and build your sentences from there. Remember that your essay phrases can also be used. Just CHANGE the TENSE TO (PRESENT) tense.
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
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Puishang
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This picture shows a park.
There are many people exercising in the park.
There is a man holding his nose while he was jogging as another man nearby was taking his pet for a walk. His pet pooed on the ground and it was very smelly. He should not do this as it will attact insects and spread diseases to others.
Nearby, there are three naughty boys throwing and playing with tincans into the dustbin. I think they should not do this as it will disrupt the society.
Two girls were playing with their pet dogs. Their expression looks delighted.
Behind them,there is a girl reading a book on the park's bench. I think she is waiting for somebody.
A bit far away, there are some elders practicing tai ji. They look healthy.
In the park, we should be more considerate so that others can enjoy their stay at the park.
This picture shows a scene of a park . There are many people doing many different things in the park , I think it is a weekend morning as usually many people excercise in the morning and when they are free , which is when they are not schooling nor working .
ReplyDeleteThere is a girl sitting on a bench , reading a book . It is good to read a book as we can gain knowledge .
Near her , there are three mischeivous boys . They were throwing drink cans from far to the dustbin . They should not be doing this as they may throw until someone else .
Behind the boys , there are three old people . They were doing taiji . It was really good for them as I believe in excercising to keep oursheves fit and healthy and they really did that despite their age .
Near the dustbin , there is a man , holding on to the latch of a dog , which is most proberbly his . The dog poo out onto the ground , and the man just stood there , doing nothing , as if he was waiting for the dog to poo finish . I think it is ok to bring a dog into a park but however , they should make sure that their pets are not moving its bowel onto the ground . He should be considerate to think that if anyone is to step on it , the unlucky person might have to wear a smelly pair of shoes for the whole morning or day .
There is a man running on the jogging track . He is covering his nose , which I think that he had smelled until the dog's poo . I think he will try running away faster since he was really pissed off by the smell .
A day in the park would be good . But if only the people are considerate , it would be better ! They should know that the park belongs to the goverment and not them , hence , we should do our part to make sure the park is safe and clean for us to go in .
This picture depicts a scene of a neighbourhood
ReplyDeletepark.There are a lot of residents at the park .
At the upper left corner, there is a little girl in her school uniform reading a storybook.
Beside her is a group of boys , throwing soft drinks can aiming at the rubbish bin . I think they should not throw it but put it into the rubbish bin.They are very irresponsbie because the can drinks may give out smelly scent. At the middle of the picture , there is two womans with their dogs. I think they are trying to make their dogs become each other friends. At the bottom left corner there is a man with his towel over his mouth. I think he smelled something smelly. Beside him is a guy with his dog , defekating at the grass , maybe thats why the guy beside him covered his nose.
The man is very inconsiderate because the dung
may be very smelly and someone would step on the dung and their shoes/feet will be very smelly. At the upper right corner , there is a group of elderlys practising taigi. -Derek
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This picture shows a park.
There are many people exercising and playing in the park.
There is a man holding on to his nose while he was jogging.
Another man nearby was taking his pet for a walk. His pet pooed on the ground and it was very smelly. He should not do this as it will attact insects and spread diseases to other people.
Not far from them, there are three naughty boys throwing and playing with tin cans into the rubbishbin. I think they should not do this as it will disturb the society.
Two girls were playing with and petting their pet puppies. Their expression looks very happy.
Behind them,there is a girl reading a book on the park's bench. I think she is waiting for somebody.
A bit far away, there are some elderly practicing tai ji. They seems very healthy.
In the park, we should be more considerate so that others can enjoy the breathtaking view of the park.
Rouu wei, (:
ReplyDeleteThis scene shows a park .
There are many people in the park , some are walking their dog and some are doing other stuffs.
On the top left corner , there is a girl reading her book . She looks like she is indulging with what she is reading .
Infront of the girl , there is another girl who is playing with her dog. She looks like she likes the dog a lot .
Beside the girl who is playing with the dog, there is a few mischeivous boys aiming cans into the rubbish bin, I think it is a very bad attitude and they have no responsible. Infront of the dusbin there is a man walking his dog. His dog just passed out his poo on the ground and yet he did not do anything. I think it is really very inconsiderate for him to do this. If other people step on it, it will be very awkward for the person. There is a man who is jogging ran past the dog and he covered his nose. I think the dog's poo must be really smelly. At the top left corner of the picture, there are a few old man exercising. They seems to be practicing their tai-ji. I think tai-ji is a good form of exercise as it can build up other's body strength. Park is a good place to relax, other's should be considerate but not litter around or do some inconsiderate stuffs. The thing that I think which is the most inconsiderate is the group of mischeivous boys. They made the cans dropped onto the floor yet they did not pick up. If everyone do this kind of actions, the park will sure be very dirty and not green and clean.
this picture show a scene at a park.There are alot of people.on the left,there's a man bringing a dog here to poo.i think it is very inconsiderate because the smell may att flees and pests to the park.the man on the right is covering his nose with his hand.on the top children's are throwing cans into the rubbish bin far away.i is not very wise for them to do that they might be fined
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ReplyDelete1.This picture shows a park,the park is quite crowded,i think it is a public holiday and people have come to the park to relax.
2.Infront of the two trees,there are three people doing "taichi",i think it is a great form of exercise as it cools you down if you arre in a bad mood.
3.Beside the lamp-post,there is a girl reading a book ,i think she must have come to the park as it is normally quite quiet here.
4.Next to the girl there are two people are cleaning the "poo" left behind by the dog,i think that they are very considerate as they cleaned the dog "poo" rather than waiting for the cleaners to do it,everyone should learn from their actions.
5.Behind The 2 People,3 Boys are throwing litters on the ground,i think their behaviour should not be tolerated as cleaners who spend their precious time cleaning have to clear their litter for them.They should throw their litter IN the bin not OUTSIDE the bin.
6.Infront of the rubbish bin,there is a man walking his dog when his dog accidentally pooped.And The Man Saw It And Did not bother to clean it up.I Think this behaviour is very inconsiderate as people may not like the smell and will dirty the air around us causing it not to be fresh.
7.behind the dog who has pooped,a man who is jogging is covering his nose,i think he must not like the smell left behind by the man and his dog.
8.A Park is A place where everyone can enjoy,but just because of some people who are inconsiderate,it can pollute the air of singapore or even the world.
1.Say what place this is.EXAMPLE...(This picture is a park)
ReplyDelete1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteThis picture depicts a scene of the park.There are many people at the park.
On talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/Some elders are exercising.There are some mischevious boys beside them , they are aiming their cans to the dustbin at a distance.Not far away , there is a girl reading a book silently.Two womans are taking care of their pets.One dog with his owners has pass , the dog is defecating.a man who had just run pass them , pinched his nose up , probably is the dog's feaces who had smelled.
b. level 2: I think /I think the ,mischevious boys throwing the cans are irresponsible .
C.level 3: why / If someone accidentally step on the cans , they might fall , and if one hits the head , it may be danger.
d. level 4: suggestion /I think they should throw the cans into the rubbish bin.
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?). /It is importan to take care of our life , and we should have be more responsible to others life , if they had suffered from their act .
Macabelle :D
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ReplyDeleteThis picture shows a sence in the park.There are quiet a lot of people in the park probaly it is a weekend.The weather is quiet hot afternoon and a lot of people are enjoying themself.
There is a man bring his dog for a walk.It is very responsible for taking good care of his dog but not cleaning up after his dog is wrong.He just cannot leave the poo at there cause probaly someone may step on it.
There is another man near him.He is joging around the park.
it is 'quite' and not 'quiet'
DeleteThis picture shows a scene of a park.There is a lot of people in the park.There is a man bringing his dog for a poo.The man did not show any considerate for other people.The poo smell smelly as a man jogging pass covering his mouth with his hand.Some elderly are doing their morining exercise.There is two teenages feeding their pets.Beside them there is a girl sitting on a banch reading a book.There
ReplyDeleteThis picture shows a crowded park.There is many people exercising and relaxing.There is a man ,who is bring his dog for a stroll in the park .The dog had poo on the ground.The man should pick up the poo and throw it to the dustbin.Beside the dog,a man who is jogging was covering his nose.In front of the man who was jogging,there are two girls playing with the two dogs.I think they are the owners of the dogs.Beside the two girls,there is a girl sitting on the bench,reading book. Beside the girls,there is a group of boy,throwing things to the dustbin.they should not do that because they might hit on to someone.Behind the boys,there is agroup of old people doing tai ji. By cheaguoxiang
ReplyDelete1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
this is the scene of the park.
i thing it is in the morning as there are a lot of poeple are free in the morning.
there is a gril reading.I think she is reading her favorite book as she is smiling.
beside her there are three boys thorwing can into the dustbin.I think they sould not do that becauese they will block other poeple from throwing thing in the bin.
Infront of the three boy,there are two women clearing their dog poop.I thing they should to that because is might dirty the park.
In the another hand,there is a man just let his dog poop on the ground.i think he should not do that becaue
This picture depicts a scene in a park.
ReplyDeleteThere is a group of old folks doing exercise.
Near them, there are some boys
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This picture 1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/
b. level 2: I think /
C.level 3: why /
d. level 4: suggestion /
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?) This picture depicts park.that place is full with people doing some of their favourite activites. In the middle of the picture there all two ladies cleaning up the deficate
jason li
ReplyDelete1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
On talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?). / E.g. It is important that we are all civic-minded so that we do not inconvenience other people unnecessary. Life is precious and we should be responsible and taking it seriously, for we have to bear the consequences and come to regret our rash acts blah blah blah
This picture depicts a scene of a park.A man
is doing his daliy run. when, a pugund scent went into his nose. It was
Picture, PRESENT TENSE check
ReplyDelete1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
On talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/
b. level 2: I think /
C.level 3: why /
d. level 4: suggestion /
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?)
This picture shows a park. There are a lot of
people in the park. Some elderly are doing their exercises. Not far from them, there are a few boys throwing empty cans into the rubbish bin. They seemed very happy. Beside them was a girl sitting silently and reading.
In front of her, there is two women who is
Sarah Tan
1. pace2. fluency3. expression
ReplyDeletePicture, PRESENT TENSE check
1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
On talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?).
this picture shows a scene in the park. i think it is early morning s there are people jogging and excercise in the park. there is a man covering his nose while he jog along the park pathment.
1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describle
b. level 2: I think
C.level 3: why
d. level 4: suggestion
this picture shows a park.the park is rather crowd.i think it was a weekend,and people come to the park for some jogging.there is a jogger who cover he s nose as a man wearing glass let his dog poo in the grass .i think it is wrong for him and the dog to do so as people might stepped on it.he should bring a plastic bag to poo.the three boys near the big dog was throwing rubbish into the dustbin but they did not aim corretly and the rubbish fell striaght on the floor.
wenting;]
1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?). / E.g. It is important that we are all civic-minded so that we do not inconvenience other people unnecessary. Life is precious and we should be responsible and taking it seriously, for we have to bear the consequences and come to regret our rash acts blah blah blah:)
lin shen 66
This picture depicts a scene of a park. It is rather crowded , perhaps it is a weekend and people come here to exercise. There is a man wearing glasses taking his dog out for a stroll. As the dog was walking, it poos. I think
This is a picture of a park.
ReplyDeleteThere are a lot of people in the park.
There are a lot of people aiming at the dustbin and when they missed,they just left it there.
There is a man went to the park with his dog but his dog was not so considered and just pass out its stools.
There was one man jogging and i felt that he is dissapointed in the owner of the dog's behaviour as it pollutes the air.
There is also a group of senior citizens practicing their TAIJI to relax their body.
There is a group of considered people bringing their dogs there and wash their dogs.
There is one girl sitting there quietly.
I do not wan to go to this place as it was too dirty.
this picture shows a scence of a park.it is jam-packed with people.
ReplyDelete1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ There are some boys playing by throwing cans into the rubbish bin. There is a dog defecating. There are some people playing with their pets. There are people nearby praticing taiji. There is a girl on the bench reading a book.
b. level 2: I think / I think the people who are playing with pets who is probably their owners. There are very responsibe, whereas, the man with his dog are not responsible. He lets his dog defecae there and the stench of it may be unbearable to the other people in the park. The boys are playing dangerously as the cans that they threw may hit another person. The people are concentracted in pratiscing taiji.
C.level 3: why /
d. level 4: suggestion /
This picture depicts a park.There are alot of people there.On the grass there is an unconsiderate man with his dog.I think he brought his dog to the park for a walk.His dog pooped on the grass and the man did not clean it up.I think he should not do this because it is very inconsiderate.Near him,there is a man jogging by and the pinched his nose as the poo is very smelly.Other joggers that pass by will also think it is smelly.(half way through....)
ReplyDeleteCarmen Sim 6/6
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ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b.
level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.
level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d.
level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
this picture shows scene at a park in the morning.there was a girl reading and eating under the dim light .beside the girl
junyu
1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?).
This picture depicts a scene of a park. It ia probabbly in the sunday morning as people are free during this period.
This is a scene of a park.It is jam packed with people.In the picture,there is a chair with a woman wearing a spectales.SHe seem to be interested in the book that she is reading.beseide her has three boy playing with can.they are throwing the can into the dustbin.almost all the can that they throw was rejected.
ReplyDeleteJunhui :)
ReplyDelete1.This Picture Depicts a scene of a Neighbourhood park
2.The park is full of hustle and bustle.
3.Near the end of the park,there are some people doing taichi.
4.I think that it is a great form of exercise as it relaxes the muscles.
5.Near them,there are 3 boys throwing tin cans into a dustbin from a distance.I think what they are doing is wrong as if the cans miss the dustbin,they might not pick it up.
6.Near the boys,there is a girl reading a book.She looks engrossed in it.
7.In front of the girl,there are two women cleaning up the mess made by a dog.I think that what they are doing is right as it is inconsiderate to leave the mess done by the dog and leave it to the cleaners to clean it.
8.Near the two women,there is a man walking his dog.He did not notice that his dog just pooped on the floor.I suggest that he clean up the mess his dog made as some other people might step on it.
9.near the dog,there is a man jogging.He is jogging off as i think that he cannot tolerate the pungent smell.
10.Overall,I think that the park is a place where many people like to do exercise and relax themselves.I think that the park will be a cleaner place if people are more considerate.
9.Near the man,there is
1. general (picture shows/depicts a scene...)
ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?). / E.g. It is important that we are all civic-minded so that we do not inconvenience other people unnecessary. Life is precious and we should be responsible and taking it seriously, for we have to bear the consequences and come to regret our rash acts blah blah blah:)
This picture depicts a scene of a peaceful park. There are people taking a morning jog, doing exercises, taking a stroll with their dog, there are also people sitting on a bench quietly reading a book and some boys who are playing. Beside the dustbin, there is a man who is bringing its dog out for a walk. The dog just pooped on the floor, but the man did not care. It is a very irreponsible act as it will disturb some of the passers-by and disrupt the environment. Not far away from them, there is a teenager taking a morning jog.
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ReplyDeleteOn talking points:
2a. level 1:describe/ E.g. The boy(s) is /are dashing across the road.
b. level 2: I think / E.g. I think he is being irresponsible to carry out such an act.
C.level 3: why / E.g His rash act could endanger his own life or even others. It may bring great misery to the unfortunate.
d. level 4: suggestion / E.g. He could use the overhead bridge or zebra crossing to cross the road.
3. conclusion, to sum up the picture(what is the message from the picture?). / E.g. It is important that we are all civic-minded so that we do not inconvenience other people unnecessary. Life is precious and we should be responsible and taking it seriously, for we have to bear the consequences and come to regret our rash acts blah blah blah:)
Carina:D 6/6
This picture depicts a picture of a park.The park is very crowded.On the top left hand corner,a girl,wearing spectacles,is sitting on a bench reading a book.On the center of the picture,were three boys throwing litter out of the rubbish bin.They were enjoying themselves but that is not the way we should throw litter.On the top right hand corner,were three elderly doing some morning warm up exercises.I think it is good as it relaxes the body.On the left side of the picture,were two girls cleaning up their dog's mess.It is very thoughtful of them to do so so that people can enjoy Mother Nature.On the bottom right hand corner,was a man taking his dog for a walk.Although his dog had made a mess in the park,he did not bother to clean up the mess.On the bottom left hand corner,was a man pinching his nose while jogging because of the stench from the dog's mess.I think that it will be a beautiful park if the people learn how toclean up the park.
This picture depicts a scene at the park.
ReplyDeleteThere are so many people doing different actions at the park.There's a man is holding the nose. The man is holding the nose because nearby him there's a man with his dog pooed on the ground and it is very smelly. i think this is the wrong way because it will affect all the people out there and the owner of the dog never picked up the god's poo and if the owner never picked up the poo,it will made the environment dirty. Nearby, there are group of boys throwing and playing tin cans into the dustbin.I think this is the wrong way because it will disrupt the society. There are two girls playing with their pets dog. Their expression looks delighted. There's a young lady sitting on the bench are reading story book.I guess she is waiting for someone while she is reading. A bit far away,there are group elderly are learning tai ji.I think if we have pets,we should not let the pets pooed on the ground and then after never picked up because it will affect our environment and it will disrupt the society.
this picture depicts a picture of a park.there are many people in the park and the park is crowded and it maybe the people is having a fun day on the weekend.On the left hand corner,a girl,wearing spectacles,is sitting on a bench reading a book..On the center of the picture,were three boys throwing litter out of the rubbish bin.on the top right hand corner ,were three elderly doing some morning warm up exercises.I think it is good as it relaxes the body..On the left side of the picture,were two girls cleaning up their dog's mess.It is very thoughtful of them to do so so that people can enjoy Mother Nature.On the bottom right hand corner,was a man taking his dog for a walk.Although his dog had made a mess in the park,he did not bother to clean up the mess.On the bottom left hand corner,was a man pinching his nose while jogging because of the stench from the dog's mess.I think that it will be a beautiful park if the people learn how to clean up the park. by:muhdnuhsyahputra 6/A 2013
ReplyDeleteThis picture depicts a picture at a park. There are so many people. some of them doing taichi and some of them doing morning jog.On the top left hand corner, a girl spectacles sitting on the bench reading a book. On the middle of the picture there three boys who is throwing litter out of the rubbish bin. Not far from the three boys, there are one dog poo at the grass and the owner of the dog do not want to clean up poo. I think he should clean up the poo so the that the smell will not disturb to people who is focus with there're activity. And the bottom of the picture there was a man pinching his nose while jogging because of the poo smell. If they did not poo or litter at the park , the park will be clean and green!^^
ReplyDeletethis picture depicts a picture of a peaceful park.the park was fill with children and parent.on the left hand corner,a girl,wearing spectacles is sitting on bench reading a book.on the centre of the picture. thre were three boys throwing litter out of the rubbish bin.i think it is a bad habit to throw rubbish out of the bin it is because it may cause the enviroment to be very dirty and nobody will have come.on the top right hand corner,there are three elderly doing some warm up for jogging. i think it is a good as it relax thr body.one left side of the picture,there were two glis cleaning uo their dog"s mess .it is throughtful of them to do so that people can enjoyed the clear and green enviroment.on the botttom right hand corner,there is a man taking his dog for a walk.he did not clean up the dog mess and made the enviroment be poullted it dirty.In conclution .I think that it will be a beautiful park if the people learn how toclean up the park.
ReplyDelete1.The picture depicts a scene at a park.
ReplyDelete2.There are many people at the park some exercising some relaxing in a way which is interesting.
3.There's a man who is walking his dog while he is walking the dog had pooped on the grass.
4.I think it is bad to ignore when your own pet pooped or peed on the ground,i think he should have carried a plastic bag,newspaper and a plastic glove to throw away the poo at the rubbish bin or somewhere which could not make the enviroment dirty.
5.Not far from them there's a man who is pinching his nose while jogging i think he had smell the smelly scent of the dog poo,he could have advice the dog owner to throw away the poo which is on the ground.
6.there's a group of boys who is playing with the tin cans and trying to throw the tin cans into the dust bins,i think it is bad to throw the tin cans because one of the tin cans could have a sharp point at the end of it as they might accidentally throw it to one of the person who is at the park.
7.There's a girl who is reading a book i think she is studying for her exam or to read and gain more knowlegde,i think it is good to read as it could increase the way you think.
8.There's a group of old but healthy looking old people exercising i think they are exercising using a dancing way which is called taichi i think it is good as you could still be healthy despite being old.
9.There's two woman who is cleaning up a mess made by dog.I think they are doing the right thing because other people would not need to clean up the mess made by other people or other pets.
10.overall,I think the park should be taken care of because it is a public place where other people and their pets would have a lovely time spending their time
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NATASHA P6/A
this picture depicts a scene of a park. There have many people in the park. Some of them are jogging,taichi,reading book and bringing the dog for a walk.One of the parent and her daughter are cleaning their dog poo.In my opinion it is good to clean the poo because some if there have a people playing or walking it may step to the poo and the shoe or sandals may have some smells. There are a group of boys are throwing the cans into the dustbin.In my opinion it is not good to throw the cans because if the boys throw highly it may hit the man that is bringing the dog with a rope at the dog neck.The man that was jogging, he pinch his nose because the dog wit the rope on his neck poo and the owner did not clean the dog poo.The girl with a spectacle was reading a book.In my opinion it is good because she did not disturb anyone.And there have a group of an old folks are doing taichi. In my opinion it is good because when we are old our bone need some exercise. Thats all
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ReplyDeleteTHIS PICTURE SHOWS A SCENE AT A PARK
THERE ARE MANY PEOPLE EXERICES.
THERE IS A MAN HOLDING HIS NOSE WHILE IS JOGGING AS ANOTHER MAN NEARBY WAS TAKING HIS PET FOR A WALK. HIS PET POO ON THE GROUNDAND IT WAS VERY SMELLY.HE SHOULDNOT DO THIS AS IT WILL ATTRACT INSECTAND SPARED DISEASE TO OTHER PEOPLE.
BESIDE THE DOG THERE IS THREE LITTLE BOYS LITTERING TIN CANS.
I THINK THEY SHOULD NOT DO THAT BECAUSE IT WIL DIRTY THE PARK.
THERES TWO GIRLS PLAYING WITH APET DOG
BEHIND HER HTRE IS A GIRL READING A BOOK WHILE SITTING AT THE CHAIR.
BESIDE THE GIRL THERE A GROUP OF OLD FOLK DOING TAI JI.
Syaza Mustika
ReplyDeleteThis picture depicts a scene at a park. There are many peoples at the park. Some are exercising, playing and walking at the park. There are a group of old folks doing taichi. It is a good habit because it is a form of exercise. Near the group of old folks, there is 3 boys throwing some cans into the dustbin. It is not good thing to do because it is littering. If i were the boy, i will put the cans into recycling bin and not to littering.Behind the 3 boys, there a girl reading a book. It is a good thing to do because it can improve our English language. Infront of the dustbin, there are a owner and a dog. The dog is shitting. The owner should take a newspaper or tissue paper to clean the shit. Beside the owner of the dog, there are a man jogging with his nose close. Maybe it is because of the smell of the dog shit. He can complain to the owner about that.
This picture depicts a scene at a park.There were so many people there.At the top right corner,a group of folks are doing tai chi.I think they are doing well because when we grow old we can be easily sick and our body will be aching.Not far from there a group of boys are kicking cans to the bin.I think they should not do that because they may hurt others by kicking the can to others.I saw a girl reading a book on a bench.I think the girl is revising and that is good.Not far from there , there are two girls cleaning the dog poo.I think they are doing well because they are helping to clean up the park not like the man leaving the poo behind for someone to clean up. -Syahirah-
ReplyDeleteThis picture depicts a scene at a park.There were many people in the park.It is weekend due to many people in the park.There is a man wearing spectacles is walking his dog.The man should not let his dog poo in the park because it is impolite and may cause air pollution.If he let his dog to do so,he will need to clean up the poo.Next to the man, there is a man jogging while pinching his nose.I think that the poo of the dog has effect the air.There is a women with her daughter are cleaning her dog poo.I think the other man with his dog should do the same way as they are.There were three boys throwing can.I think they should throw the cans in the dustbin.
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ReplyDeleteThis picture shows a scence at the park.There are many people at the park.On the top left hand corner there is a girl that is wearing a spectacles,is sitting on a bench and reading a book.I think that it is good to read because the girl can gain knoledge.Not far from there,there were three elderly doing some morning warm up or excersice .In the middle of the picture there were three boys that is trowing the ball at the bin.I think that it is a wrong way to respect mother nature and the enviroment by messing up the place.On the left side corner of the picture there were two girls that is cleaning up their dog poo that is on the ground.I think that is a good way to treat the enviroment.On the bottom right hand corner,there was a man taking his dog for a walk.Altrought his dog has poo on the ground.I think that the man should clean up his dog poo because it is his responsible and to keep the enviroment clean.In my conclusion,i have learn to keep the enviroment cleen.
this picture shows at a park..they seems to be very happy and enjoying at a park..at the park there is many people at the park..i think that is one week days..there is man with spec is bring his dog for a walk at the park..the dog poo at the grass..in my opinion he should not poo at the grass...the man which jogging at the park is pinching his nose..he is pinching his nose because the poo is very smelly..in my opinion,the men which is jogging can approach the men to pick up the poo so that is not smelly and it is hygiene so people can picnic at the grass..there is a girl sitting on the bench and enjoying reading a book..she is having a fresh air while reading a book..while the greens like the trees is producing oxygen when there are having photosynthesis..there is a three boys playing can and throwing at the dustbin...they should not play with the dustbin because the people around the park will need to use the dustbin..if they are playing with the dustbin the people around the park cannot use the dustbin and the can will hit people head..it will injure people around there..in my opinion the people around the park can approach three of them..there a group of elderly women and elderly men is having a Tia chi ..i think they are having fun while having Tia chi..in my opinion it will be good because there are exercising and it will be good for their body as their age is already getting old..in my conclusion they can make this park more fun and have more trees for a fresh air..
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NAME : NURULAIN WAHYUNI :) CLASS : 6/A
ReplyDelete1) This picture depics a scene at a park .
2) There wer many people there .
3)At the end of the park , there are some people doing taichi .
4)I think what they are doing is a good habbit bacause taichi is a form of exercise .
5)Not far from them , there are 3 boys throwing tin cans into the dustbin while they were standing far from the distance of the dustbin . I think what they are doing is wrong because they might miss directions and when the tin cans dropped down , the will not oick it up.
6)Not far from the boys , there is a girl reeding a book .
7)Infront of the girl , there were two women cleaning up the mess that was made by a dog .I think what they are doing is right as they helped the cleaners to clean up the mess .
8)Not far from the women , there were a man bringing his dog for a walk and maybe he did not notice that his dog pooped on the floor or he knows but he ignored it .
9)Near the dog there were a man jogging . I think the man jogs off as he can't take in the pungnent smell .
10)I think people went to this place for exercising or maybe relaxing their mind .
This picture illustraits a scene at a park .I think it is a public holiday or a weekend as there is many people at the park .The park looks green with trees .There many people excercising and going for a jog .I think it is a good habit as when we exercise we will benefit by gaining good health and peaceful mind .There is a group of old people doing an exercise call
ReplyDelete'tai chi' . It is a good habit for old folks as they can be more stronger and healthier .In front of the group of old folks , there is a dustbin filled with tincans and rubish .Beside the dustbin , there is a group of boys throwing more tincans and rubish into the filled dustbin .I think that their doing is wrong as they have already know that the dustbin is full and some of the litter has dropped out from the dustbin . They should consider to pick up the litter and throw it into the dustbin properly . Next to the dustbin ,There is a man with a dog and the dog have pooed .I think it is a wrong think to do as he should use a plastic or a paper and take it up and throw it into the dustbin .In general we have to keep our neighbourhood or park clean and do our part as we are also using it .
jacelyn :This picture depicts a scene at a park.The park is very crowded.not far from the dustbin , there are three elderly doing some morning exercise. think it is good to do some exercise when it is early as it relaxes the body. in front of the dustbin there are three youngster throwing litter out of the rubbish bin.they are enjoying littering around but it is not good to do that way as they are destroying the environment. be side the youngsters there is a little girl with a spectacle who was sitting a a bench while reading a book.in my opinion, it is good to read book at the park but it may also affect your eyes if you read very long.across the girl which is beside the rubbish bin , there is a puppy and a girl is helping to clean up the mess of the puppy. i'm glad that they know how to take of the environment , i would like to learn more from them. in front of the track road,there is a man taking the dog for a walk. although the dog has made a mess, the man did not bother to clean up the mess.while they are walking a young man jog across them with his hand covering the mouth and nose.in my opinion , it is because of the stench from the dog's mess.in conclusion , i that we as a human should know how to take care of our environment.
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ReplyDeleteThis picture depicts a scene at the park.There were many people in the park.At the top right corner,there is a group of old folks doing taichi to exercise themselve and to make theirselve healthy.Beside the old folks,there is a group of boy throwing a can at the dustbin.In my opinion,that is not good because they are littering the place as
well.At the right,there is a dog and its owner.The dog is shitting.If i were the owner i would bring plastic bag soo if my dog shit,i would pick the shit up.Near the dog,there is a man tha is jogging,covering his nose because the dog shit is smelly.IN conclusion,we sshould make our environment clean
this picture shows a park.there are many people in the park.
ReplyDeletethere is a man jogging.there is a man walking his dog.and there are boys playing kites.there is a girl reading a book.
this picture depicts a picture of a park.the park is very crowed.on the top left corner there is a girl is siting on the beanch and reading peacefully.this is a good habit cause she can improve in her english.on the centre of the pic, three boys were throwing litter out of the rubbish bin.this a bad habit cause they should keep clean of their environment.on the top rigth hand corner,there were three old ladys doing some warm up exercises.i think it is god as it relaxes the body.on the left side of the picture,were two girl cleaning up thier cats dog had made a mess in the park,he did not bother to clean up.the bottom left hand corner there is a man piniching his nose while jogging becuse of the stench of the dog mess.i think that it will be a beautiful park if the people learn how to clean the park.
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